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    My son the poet

    Kosta created the below for his English homework

    The silver ball
    From side to side
    The button pressed
    The flipper rises
    The ball gets hit
    And shot gets bricked
    The outlane drained
    We yell in pain
    the new ball in play
    Plunger pulled
    Up the shooter lane it races
    to the waiting bumpers
    This way, that way, quick quick
    Out it comes
    To the sky it races
    Up the ramp
    Down the ramp
    Quick lock Multi-ball
    Over time auto fire
    Now there are multiple
    Newton’s cradle disturbed
    Balls in disarray
    The collision imminent
    I accept my doom
    As all of the balls
    Go down the center hole
    But that is just how we play pinball

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    Well done Kosta! That poem is awesome


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    must be a proud dad! what a little legend

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    Well put, sounds like English is his strong point

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    Thanks for all the likes and comments - Kosta’s pretty chuffed


    Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk

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    really good, what a smart dude, he'll go far

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    Well done really creative. but if it was me, I would have submitted the lyrics to pinball wizard and called it my own lol

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    Love it! Haven't seen you guys in ages. Looking forward to next time.

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    A very talented son indeed.
    Awesome work there Kosta.

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    Beautiful Manny...you must be so proud.

    Wish my son was in to the silverball!

    His claim to fame will be on 7 news in a minute with his phone footage of a stabbing incident in our bloody street last night!!!
    Kids, drugs, lack of discipline...what is the world coming to...

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